WWW - In order of importance

Here's Wednesday's travesty of a strip.
I really don't like to criticize myself but I have to speak my mind as to not come across as oblivious: I hate this strip. I loved the idea when I wrote it, and I actually still like the dialogue.

But I executed the visual horribly. That is entirely due to bad planning on my part. I wasn't sure what perspective the comic would focus on in the first two panels, and I rushed an idea out and this is what happened. The first panel is just ugly, and the second panel....ehhh, I'm not sure if it's ugly or alright. I haven't decided.

Truth be told, I'm actually quite happy with the third panel. That's one of the better painting-esque backgrounds I've done, in my opinion. My only gripe is that the visual plane is off, but since the only reference to that is the door Shana is standing in, so it doesn't bug me too much. I could fix it easily if I wanted.

The rest of it is just..garbage. Honestly, it's just not good. Maybe I'm beating myself up more than I should over it, but the point is I am not happy with this particular strip.